Take a long, deep breath when
reaching for Kim Moore’s first full collection, The Art
of Falling (Seren 2015), because you’ll be tumbling with her from the first
page onwards through her intoxicating verse.
Moore’s signature poetic
technique is repetition. Her work is riven with it and driven by it. There are
certain poems that even make explicit, conscious nods towards its use, such as “A
Psalm for the Scaffolders”:
“…a psalm for the scaffolders
who fall with a harness on,
who have ten minutes to be
rescued,
a psalm for the scaffolder who
fell
into a clear area, a tube giving
way,
that long. slow fall, a psalm for
him,
who fell thirty feet and
survived,
a psalm for the scaffolder
who saw him fall…”
Moore’s strengths in her
employment of repetition are various. She repeats phrases with slight
variations such as in the tense of a verb (“fall” and “fell”), which invites
the reader to home in on those small changes. Meanwhile, the repeating of whole
structures such as the poem’s title empowers the piece as an invocation. And
then there’s the building of clauses in the continual use of “who”, generating
a pace that combines with the afore-mentioned invocation to lend this poem a
religious charge. In other words, form and content fuse superbly.
Poem after poem, repetition crops
up:
“..a fall from grace, a fall from
God,
to fall in love or to fall
through the gap…”
“And if it be a horse…
…And if it be a swan…
…And if it be a tick…”
“A curse on the children…
…a curse on the boy…
…a curse on the class teacher…”
“And if you saw her…
…and if she set fire…
…and if she threw…”
“…as if one person can’t carry
this with them
and be unchanged, as if I could
speak seagull…”
And I could quote umpteen more. However,
it’s important to underline that Moore is far from being a one-trick pony. There
is variation in tone, of course, alongside a deft narrative touch, a gift for delicious turns of phrase and a fabulous ear, as befits a music teacher. Nevertheless,
repetition rules for much of the book, creating the sensation of a relentless
emotional thrust, charging onwards, seeking an authentic core.
In The Art of Falling, that core is to be found in “How I Abandoned My
Body To His Keeping”, a sequence about
“a relationship marked by coercion and violence”. This sequence lies at
the heart of the collection. I could highlight any one of several pieces for
their power, for their capacity to move and affect, but a personal favourite is
“His Name”. Here are the first four lines:
“Because they tried to make me
say your name,
the shame and blame and frame of
it,
the dirty little game of it, the
dark and distant
heart of it, the cannot be a part
of it…”
And there’s that repetition again,
in Moore’s gorgeous use of the definite article. Of course, it’s even better in
the context of the poem as a whole, but you’ll have to get hold of a copy of The Art of Falling to see what I mean.
Just keep in mind that piece of advice I gave earlier: don’t forget to take a
long, deep breath when snapping the spine.