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Friday, 18 December 2015
A major update to the poetry blog list
Having recently posted a highly subjective summary of the best U.K. poetry blogs of 2015 (see here), Rogue Strands has now also got round to sprucing up its blog list (to the right of this text). The intention is to provide constantly updating links to the most recent posts from these excellent blogs, all to facilitate your poetry blog reading and enjoyment.
Sunday, 13 December 2015
Naomi Jaffa on the end of an era at Aldeburgh
As the former long-time Director of the Poetry Trust, Naomi Jaffa is in a unique position to evaluate the situation at Aldeburgh, where it seems this year's festival might be the last of its kind. Her guest post on the subject over at Anthony Wilson's blog is consequently required reading. I very much recommend you read it in whole: her habitual generosity is on show once more, highlighting the work of poets rather than her own huge amount of graft. Perhaps the following quote from her article is key to how we might view recent events:
"...If it’s true what they say about all good things – and how can it not be, given our finite reserves of time and energy – then sometimes I can’t help wishing we’d strive to be less greedy (people always seem to want and feel the right to expect more) and more grateful. It’s been a marvellous thing, Aldeburgh, and no one can take away the preciousness of all those shared live readings and the evidence of the archive recordings. Enough should be enough..."
Let's celebrate what Aldeburgh has given us. Moreover, it's been a point of reference and departure for so many new festivals that have sprung up around the country over the past few years. Every time we attend such a festival in the future, we'll be accompanied by the legacy of Aldeburgh.
"...If it’s true what they say about all good things – and how can it not be, given our finite reserves of time and energy – then sometimes I can’t help wishing we’d strive to be less greedy (people always seem to want and feel the right to expect more) and more grateful. It’s been a marvellous thing, Aldeburgh, and no one can take away the preciousness of all those shared live readings and the evidence of the archive recordings. Enough should be enough..."
Let's celebrate what Aldeburgh has given us. Moreover, it's been a point of reference and departure for so many new festivals that have sprung up around the country over the past few years. Every time we attend such a festival in the future, we'll be accompanied by the legacy of Aldeburgh.
Wednesday, 9 December 2015
The teaching of metrics
Can an ear be taught…? Can a
voice be taught…? Can creativity be taught…? These are all key questions that
face any teacher or student of creative writing. They also provoke endless
argument and debate.
Can metrics be taught? Of course they
can. No argument, no debate. Whether we like them or loathe them, metrics are the nuts
and bolts of poetry, the mechanics that lie behind all the verse we write, a
set of rules can be broken to greater conscious effect once they are
understood.
Just as most top abstract artists
are also exceptional realist painters, so a fundamental knowledge of metrics
lies behind the writing of the majority of high-quality free verse. I’m fully
aware there are examples of intuitive creative exceptions, but that is exactly
what they remain: exceptions.
In the light of the above, why do
so many poetry writing courses (again, I know there are certain exceptions) either ignore metrics or devote a few paltry sessions
to them? Instead, metrics should be a point of departure, stimulating
creativity, not stunting it.
Another option is simply to teach
yourself, in which case I strongly recommend a frail book: Rhyme’s Reason by John Hollander.
Tuesday, 1 December 2015
The Best U.K. Poetry Blogs of 2015
As the year comes to a close, it's time for Rogue Strands to
deliver a selection of The Best U.K. Poetry Blogs of 2015. Like always, this list
is hugely subjective and partial, and also getting longer, which indicates the
terrific state of health of the poetry blogging scene in the U.K.. Of course, a
few blogs have faded away since last year, but many others have come roaring
through:
- John Field’s Poor Rude Lines. Field is first up
because he remains a benchmark for all other bloggers. His work is rigorous and
entertaining, while also encouraging readers to broaden their tastes. Of
course, his posts involve so much work that they can’t appear on a weekly
basis. This doesn’t lessen their impact.
- Jo Bell’s The Bell Jar encapsulates her energy, enthusiasm and community
spirit. She’s a driving force in U.K. poetry, a supporter to all around her.
- Dave Coates’ Dave Poems. Forthright and
uncompromising, Dave Coates provides us with excellent reviews on his blog. He
might not court controversy, but he doesn’t shirk it either.
- Anthony Wilson’s blog gently,
implicitly educates us with every post. He is outstanding at exploring the
intricacies of the relationship between poetry and life. Wilson doesn’t achieve
this by lecturing. Instead, he works with illustrations from his own
experiences.
- Fiona Moore’s Displacement displays the same lightness
of touch as her poetry. Her reviews provide unexpected perspectives, her
anecdotes make you imagine you’re at her side and her analysis of poetic trends
is always intriguing.
- George Szirtes’ blog is irreverent
and highly relevant. There are squibs, stories and snapshots of a poet’s life,
all written in a delicious prose that carries the reader along.
- Tim Love’s litrefs provides us with three strands rolled into one: there’s the
main blog and then litrefs reviews and litrefs articles alongside. He
always makes me doubt my own views. That’s an exceptional quality.
- Martyn Crucefix’s blog is
unblinking and packed with high quality material, especially his razor-sharp
reviews and ruminations on the judging process. His unexpected perspectives on
big names are well worth a read.
- Ben Wilkinson’s Deconstructive Wasteland. Poetic vigour
hums through this blog. There are numerous reviews by Wilkinson that were first
published in major journals, top-notch original verse by the man himself and a
decent dose of well-argued opinion.
- Roy Marshall’s blog is generous
in so many ways. It gives us moral support and a point of comparison with our
own poetic experiences, all doused in humility and talent.
- Katy Evans-Bush’s Baroque in Hackney lives up to its name.
Accessible erudition runs though every post, as does her scrupulous prose
style. Wide-ranging and forever inquisitive, it’s a treasure trove.
- Kim Moore’s blog posts flow and
surge like her poems. They lift you up in their story and carry you off. What’s
more, her Sunday poem feature introduces countless new poets to her readers.
She’s rightly a popular figure, and her blog always gives us a glorious read.
- Clarissa Aykroyd's The Stone and The Star constantly surprises with new discoveries and reminders of old favourites. The analysis of Keith Douglas' work is particularly perceptive.
- Robin Houghton’s blog. Frank
and sincere, Robin Houghton is one of very few poets who are brave enough to
chart rejections and failure in gory detail along acceptances and success. When
reading her blog, we can’t fail to be encouraged and reminded that
achievement-packed Facebook feeds are not always a true reflection of the state
of play.
- Emma Lee’s blog will take you
some time. This is simply because it’s so loaded down with excellent resources:
there are reviews and debates galore, while her how-to features are especially
good.
- Clare Best’s Self-Portrait Without Breasts is the
chronicle of one of the most interesting personal journeys in U.K. poetry. It
offers us the chance to chart the evolution of her non-stop creativity.
- Gareth Prior’s blog has changed
slightly in focus over the past year, shifting to more intermittent posts that
explore their subject – individual poems, collections or critical issues – in
great depth, enabling us to get to grips with issues rather than encountering a
superficial sweep.
- Matt Merritt’s Polyolbion might be a veteran of the
U.K. poetry blogging scene, but that doesn’t mean its merits are solely in its
archive. This year has seen Merritt offer piercing perspectives on poetic
issues of the day, alongside numerous introductions to excellent articles elsewhere.
- Sheenagh Pugh’s blog combines
opinion, interviews and reviews. It’s also an extremely dangerous place to
browse. She’s excellent at capturing the essence of a book and encouraging you
to make a purchase.
- John Foggin’s cobweb seethes with passion and
enthusiasm for poetry. His blog is a wonderful pick-me-up whenever you doubt
the positive effect that the poetry world can have on those who populate it.
Moreover, John Foggin writes beautifully about his own fusion of personal
experience and verse.
- Maria Taylor’s Commonplace might be a lovely poetic
journal, but it’s also far more. There’s a sense of her forming part of a wider
poetry community that then transmits through to her writing.
- Jayne Stanton’s blog is
especially interesting for the way it charts her development over the past few
years from early magazine appearances to her first pamphlet. It provides real
encouragement for others who are starting out on a similar journey.
- David Clarke’s A Thing for Poetry provides links to his
perceptive reviews elsewhere, all along with his own news and thought-provoking
views on wider poetic issues.
- Abegail Morley’s Poetry Shed has long provided a space
for poets to showcase their work, but it also includes calls for submissions,
info on prizes and themed projects. It remains a key point of reference in the
U.K. poetry blogging scene.
- Josephine Corcoran runs two
significant poetry blogs. On the one hand, there’s her personal journal. On the
other, there’s And Other Poems,
which is perhaps turning into a webzine more than just a blog as such. In any
case, it’s home to a huge number of carefully selected, fabulous poems.
- Todd Swift’s Eyewear blog is connected to the
publishing house of the same name and throws in reviews, news and a few
controversial opinions.
- Helena Nelson’s Happenstance blog also unsurprisingly
forms part of HappenStance Press. It remains a unique insight into an editor’s
job and is required reading for any poet who might be thinking about submitting
a manuscript to anyone, anywhere.
- Charles Boyle’s Sonofabook not only possesses a terrific
title, but that same wit and intelligence is evident in every post. It draws on
Boyle’s vast experience n the U.K. poetry scene, while also reflecting his
current project at CB Editions.
- Jane Commane at Nine Arches Press maintains a blog that
showcases new collections on a regular basis. They give an excellent flavour of
the book to come, and they’ve drawn me in on many occasions.
Deep breath...exhale…that’s all
for this year! Apologies for anyone I’ve missed out: I know only too well that
horrible feeling of reading through a list,
reaching the end and realising you’re not there. My blog reading is
incomplete and anarchic, so any undeserved absence is 100% my fault.
Oh, and thank you for reading
through one of the longest posts ever published on Rogue
Strands!!
Wednesday, 25 November 2015
Chrissy Williams' new poetry blog
Chrissy Williams is an excellent poet and the director of the Poetry Book Fair. Such a point of departure would already make her new poetry blog worth a look. However, if we add in the fact that her writing is fun to read while also thought-provoking, the blog's becoming extremely interesting. Moreover, if we top this off with a terrific post comparing her work at comics conventions (as an editor) with her experience of the afore-mentioned Poetry Book Fair, then it's fast turning into a necessity. Here a quote to give you a flavour of what I mean:
"While I love the idea of secret caves filled with poetry gold, more people need to know about them if they're going to survive. I don't want to live in a cave. I want a better map."
You can read her fascinating post in full here.
"While I love the idea of secret caves filled with poetry gold, more people need to know about them if they're going to survive. I don't want to live in a cave. I want a better map."
You can read her fascinating post in full here.
Monday, 23 November 2015
OPOI
I was delighted to read the other day that Sphinx poetry pamphlet reviews are open for business again (see here). What's more, they're explicitly seeking "OPOI" pieces: i.e. "One Point Of Interest".
This format is especially interesting in the context of short, blog-length reviews. Instead of a whistle-stop, sometimes superficial tour round a collection, the reader finds an in-depth focus on a specific point. Furthermore, true to the Sphinx tradition of juxtaposing different reviews of one pamphlet, the hope is that some chapbooks will attract multiple viewpoints, each picking up on a single aspect, as if engaging in an implicit conversation.
I'll be following developments with interest. For the moment, I'd recommend reading the review by Helena Nelson of Clare Best's remarkable new pamphlet, Cell.
This format is especially interesting in the context of short, blog-length reviews. Instead of a whistle-stop, sometimes superficial tour round a collection, the reader finds an in-depth focus on a specific point. Furthermore, true to the Sphinx tradition of juxtaposing different reviews of one pamphlet, the hope is that some chapbooks will attract multiple viewpoints, each picking up on a single aspect, as if engaging in an implicit conversation.
I'll be following developments with interest. For the moment, I'd recommend reading the review by Helena Nelson of Clare Best's remarkable new pamphlet, Cell.
Monday, 16 November 2015
Company or solitude, Andrew Waterman's Living Room
There are times when happenstance isn’t limited to the publisher of that name…
…back in the summer, I ordered a
second-hand copy of Jonathan Davidson’s The
Living Room over the internet. A few days later, a padded envelope turned
up. It contained an invoice and delivery note for Davidson’s book, alongside a
1974 first edition of Andrew Waterman’s Living
Room, his first collection from The Marvell Press, decked out in their
characteristic livery that always reminds me of The Less Deceived.
I was already an admirer of
Waterman’s work in anthologies, but this was a chance to get to grips with it
as the poet had originally intended. Living
Room is a terrific book. Just like Douglas Dunn’s Terry Street, which was published five years earlier, it shows
Larkin’s influence in many poems. However, Waterman goes further than Dunn and
manages to establish an implicit dialogue with Larkin. One such example is
“Calling”, in which the speaker takes on the Mr Bleaney role, giving it a new
twist:
“…And I was led up past landing
kitchenettes,
And round and up to a
slope-roofed room, low bed,
Bed-table, titling wardrobe,
cheap bowl fire.
“That’s it, and there’s the
meter.” Then,
“You’re young,” he added, “where
is your home?”
“Home?” I replied. “Home’s where
I find myself…””
There’s a tension throughout Living Room between the need for company
and solitude. In this respect, the afore-mentioned poem bears comparison and
contrast with another poem, “Betrayal”. In recent years I’ve read a number of
successful poems about sharing a bed (Armitage, Duddy and Davidson among them),
but “Betrayal” again contributes a fresh, jolting perspective:
“”…Again? To try again again?” he
shrank.
And so, apart, both slept.
And wake to find their bodies are
entwined
familiarly in warmth and
disengage
retreating to the bed’s cold
edges,
embarrassed that unwilled flesh
should betray
the separation of true minds.”
Waterman’s exploration of his conflicting
view on company and solitude also homes in on the accumulation of emotional and
physical clutter, the urge to acquire it, then loathe it, then shed it. The collection’s title poem plays a key role, as in the following
extract:
“Freedom to thrust like that
through all I’ve dumped into
a bare life since first bareness
seemed failure forfeited
by each act that furnished it,
I dwell here claimed by what
I’ve chosen: living room
that by the more it holds
feels less my home.”
By playing off “more” and “less”,
Waterman again achieves an effect that’s reminiscent of Larkin, but the
emotional drive is all his own.
Monday, 9 November 2015
All-pervading absence, Fiona Moore's Night Letter
Fiona Moore’s second pamphlet, Night Letter (HappenStance Press, 2015), is very much a sequel to her first one, The
Only Reason for Time (HappenStance Press, 2013).
If the earlier chapbook dealt with
Moore’s grief and bereavement in the aftermath of her partner’s death, this new
collection looks at what comes next. What lies beyond the immediacy of grief
when the person in question has been so pivotal to you? Their absence is so
all-pervading that it consumes the rest of your life. How are you to face the
yawning years ahead?
In Night Letter, Moore meets these issues head-on with the same
detached yet committed poetics as she displayed in her first pamphlet. Her
focus is on the night-time, when nothing can interrupt
the maelstrom of emotions. They veer to and fro throughout the book, expressed with
exquisite linguistic skill via devices such as the use of double negatives and
self-contradiction:
“…I can’t not imagine you…”
“…both nearer and further away…”
Her poem “The Embrace”,
meanwhile, portrays an encounter with her dead partner in a dream. It provides
us with a passage that’s key to a greater understanding of this collection:
“…We hugged and
life began to run again through
my veins and bones
heart and head…”
Those afore-mentioned
contradictions are brought to the fore here, implicit and intense. An embrace
brings the speaker back to life, yet the other party is dead. She’s coming
alive within a dream, yet the dream is condemned to end imminently and leave
her in a living death. Moreover, emotional and physical life and death merge and separate and merge again. The reader is invited to compare and contrast this dream-like state of
the night with the terrifying shell of the day that awaits.
Back in 2013, The Only Reason for Time seemed an
immense achievement in itself, a remarkable stand-alone project. If anything,
the only doubt was as to how Fiona Moore might progress from there in poetic
terms. Well, Night Letter provides a
conclusive answer. She’s built on her earlier book and explored new territory
beyond it. This is poetry that will last.
Wednesday, 4 November 2015
Comeback
There are certain books that inhabit my desk. I love to have them close at hand, to pick them up and encounter old friends: poems that accompany me.
One such example is Matt Merritt's Making The Most Of The Light. Back in 2005, it was one of the first ever pamphlets to be published by HappenStance Press and is long out of print. Of course, Merritt's verse has developed since then, and I also very much enjoy his later books, but the poems from that early pamphlet are special to me. Moreover, he didn't include any of them in his full collections, so there's a certain rarity value involved.
Perhaps my personal favourite is "Comeback". I'm grateful to Matt Merritt himself for permission to reprint the poem in full here:
Comeback
And to finish I'll double
- no, treble - the black.
Corner pocket, after getting
just enough screwback
on the final red.
This one's for all the times
we played for safety
when we could have played
for so much more.
For all the times we worried
about keeping
one foot on the floor.
I requested the afore-mentioned permission because short quotes wouldn't have done the piece justice. It's only on reading the whole poem that its emotional power, expressed with elegant simplicity, becomes clear.
"Comeback" begins with apparent liberation: an extravagant shot to finish a frame. From there on, Merritt qualifies the act. Syntax marries perfectly with semantics, as linguisitic and emotional restraint come together. By the final stanza, the reader has realised that the shot on the black is far from a liberation: in fact, it's an expression of anger at not having achieved any liberation at all.
As a consequence, the reader is sent scampering back to the start as soon as they reach the end: a terrific quality for any poem to possess. Limpid language doesn't have to be facile. In Merritt's hands, it's textured and layered. That's why I love his verse.
One such example is Matt Merritt's Making The Most Of The Light. Back in 2005, it was one of the first ever pamphlets to be published by HappenStance Press and is long out of print. Of course, Merritt's verse has developed since then, and I also very much enjoy his later books, but the poems from that early pamphlet are special to me. Moreover, he didn't include any of them in his full collections, so there's a certain rarity value involved.
Perhaps my personal favourite is "Comeback". I'm grateful to Matt Merritt himself for permission to reprint the poem in full here:
Comeback
And to finish I'll double
- no, treble - the black.
Corner pocket, after getting
just enough screwback
on the final red.
This one's for all the times
we played for safety
when we could have played
for so much more.
For all the times we worried
about keeping
one foot on the floor.
I requested the afore-mentioned permission because short quotes wouldn't have done the piece justice. It's only on reading the whole poem that its emotional power, expressed with elegant simplicity, becomes clear.
"Comeback" begins with apparent liberation: an extravagant shot to finish a frame. From there on, Merritt qualifies the act. Syntax marries perfectly with semantics, as linguisitic and emotional restraint come together. By the final stanza, the reader has realised that the shot on the black is far from a liberation: in fact, it's an expression of anger at not having achieved any liberation at all.
As a consequence, the reader is sent scampering back to the start as soon as they reach the end: a terrific quality for any poem to possess. Limpid language doesn't have to be facile. In Merritt's hands, it's textured and layered. That's why I love his verse.
Thursday, 29 October 2015
Tasting Notes has now sold out
Tasting Notes, my second HappenStance pamphlet, has just sold out, although I've kept back a few copies for sale at forthcoming readings. This means that almost the entire print runs of both my chapbooks - 350 copies of Tasting Notes and 250 copies of Inventing Truth - have found a home. Now it's time to get back to work on polishing my first full collection manuscript...
Friday, 23 October 2015
Depth and coherence, Jonathan Davidson's Early Train
Perhaps my greatest thrill as a
reader is the discovery of a new poet, that moment when I open a collection,
start gulping down the poems and immediately realise they’re going to be with
me for the long haul. Of course, such moments become rarer as time goes by, but
that only serves to render them even more significant.
It’s for this reason that I’m
featuring Jonathan Davidson’s 2011 Smith-Doorstep collection, Early Train. He might not be a new poet,
but he has been to me this year. I’ve gradually got hold of all his books, and
they’re now fixtures on my desk. However, my favourite is Early Train.
There’s no doubt that this
collection was unjustly neglected on release. The manner of Davidson’s poetry
is unassuming, as is his profile as a poet, yet his work is packed with
rewarding punches. As his verse has developed, Davidson’s poems have acquired
a quiet depth and immense aesthetic coherence that resonate far more than the
work of other more famous contemporaries whose main concerns are their haircuts,
best camera angles and poetic posturing.
Early Train offers us page after
page of poems that provide the jolt of recognition. In other words, they
provoke a sudden self-awareness in the reader that sets us off on our own imaginative
journey. One such piece is “The Flowers”, which uses understated syntax to
powerful semantic effect, as in the poem’s final quatrain:
“…They are often seen on bridges
spanning motorways, the stems
wilting but unable to collapse,
traffic moving freely beneath.”
Davidson is implicitly inviting
us to recall moments when we have seen such flowers ourselves, asking us how we
were affected. Moreover, his use of apparently everyday language enables him to
load certain specific words with additional connotations, creating a tension
via juxtaposition: ”..wilting...unable…collapse…freely…” all qualify each other
and all build on each other’s power.
The everyday is present
throughout Davidson’s poetry, but this is never kitchen-sink verse. Instead, he
plays concrete acts and details off with an intense imaginative world. One such
instance can be found in a comparison between the opening and closing lines of “Tony”:
“I’m reconciling a bank account, thinking
of you.
A thousand little contracts keep
me in the black…
…I find you in the charnel
darkness, in the chaos
and disorder, the lost stuff. I
am un-reconciled.”
And Early Train is full of poems of such quality. It’s a collection of
maturity by an outstanding poet. I’m hugely saddened by its lack of impact on
publication but also encouraged that its slow-burning reputation is growing
among discerning readers of poetry. I know that many of my friends are already keen fans
and I hope this feature will contribute in some small way to the process.
Monday, 12 October 2015
Needlewriters in Lewes this Thursday
Just a gentle reminder that I'll be reading as a guest poet at Needlewriters in Lewes this Thursday (7 p.m. for 7.45 p.m.). I've been looking forward to this event for a long time, so it's difficult to believe the day has almost arrived! Here are a few more details:
Needlewriters is a co-operative of poets and prose writers who present a reading each quarter at the Needlemakers Café in Lewes, showcasing writers in a lovely venue. Food and drink are available throughout the evening from the café.
On this occasion, I'll be reading alongside Ros Barber (who'll be featuring her prose) and poet Caroline Clark. I'll be bringing along copies of both my HappenStance pamphlets for sale, but this will be one of the last chances to get hold of a copy, as Inventing Truth is already officially sold out and Tasting Notes is well on the way.
Needlewriters is a co-operative of poets and prose writers who present a reading each quarter at the Needlemakers Café in Lewes, showcasing writers in a lovely venue. Food and drink are available throughout the evening from the café.
On this occasion, I'll be reading alongside Ros Barber (who'll be featuring her prose) and poet Caroline Clark. I'll be bringing along copies of both my HappenStance pamphlets for sale, but this will be one of the last chances to get hold of a copy, as Inventing Truth is already officially sold out and Tasting Notes is well on the way.
Tuesday, 6 October 2015
Payment for poetry readings?
Over the past five years I've given readings as a guest poet in Oxford, Shrewsbury, Leicester, Portsmouth, Coventry, Edinburgh, London (three times), St Andrews, Nottingham and Cheltenham, while Lewes and Bradford on Avon are coming up. In doing so, I've met a lot of lovely people, many of whom have become friends, while also introducing my work to terrific audiences.
On certain occasions I've read to no more than a dozen people, on others to packed halls. Sometimes I've been paid well, but just as often I've received no fee whatsoever. In those cases, I was delighted just to have the chance to present my poetry and maybe sell a few pamphlets to cover costs. What's more, I'll continue to read at such events when I get the chance.
However, another issue presented itself a few months ago during a conversation with a well regarded organiser of poetry readings. I was told that they only offered a fee if the poet in question made a living from their verse (even if indirectly via Creative Writing courses, etc), regardless of the quality of the poetry or the pulling power of their name. If a poet had other sources of income that weren't connected to verse, the organiser preferred to save any available funds for someone who was financially dedicated to the art.
I disagree entirely with such a position. The standard of verse, the quality of a reading and the potential audience should be the fundamental criteria, not the way poets earn a crust. What do you think?
On certain occasions I've read to no more than a dozen people, on others to packed halls. Sometimes I've been paid well, but just as often I've received no fee whatsoever. In those cases, I was delighted just to have the chance to present my poetry and maybe sell a few pamphlets to cover costs. What's more, I'll continue to read at such events when I get the chance.
However, another issue presented itself a few months ago during a conversation with a well regarded organiser of poetry readings. I was told that they only offered a fee if the poet in question made a living from their verse (even if indirectly via Creative Writing courses, etc), regardless of the quality of the poetry or the pulling power of their name. If a poet had other sources of income that weren't connected to verse, the organiser preferred to save any available funds for someone who was financially dedicated to the art.
I disagree entirely with such a position. The standard of verse, the quality of a reading and the potential audience should be the fundamental criteria, not the way poets earn a crust. What do you think?
Friday, 2 October 2015
Clarity and mystery, Wayne Price's Fossil Record
Wayne Price’s Fossil Record (Smith-Doorstep, 2015)
might be his first poetry pamphlet, but he’s far from being a novice in
literary terms. Price has previously published a short story collection and a
novel, and this experience shows in the coherence of his poetics.
One of the outstanding poems in
the collection is “Loyalties”, as it encapsulates many of Price’s qualities and
techniques. For example, it opens with a generic statement before clarifying,
illustrating, yet also casting doubt and qualifying via the use of specifics.
Throughout the poem, there’s a
dexterous managing of pronouns that brings about an interplay between “I”,
“you” and “we” in syntactic and semantic terms, both aspects working in
harmony, showing a deep understanding of the nuts and bolts of narrative.
However, this doesn’t mean that Price is indulging in chopped-up prose: the
music, the pacing, the cadences and the line breaks are all proof of his ear
for verse, as in the poem’s closing stanza:
“…He didn’t have to come between
us in the end.
when I left to rent a single room
I couldn’t take him. And you
were out at work all day:
He’d have chewed the house down.
Twenty-five years. Ah, God.
Wouldn’t we let him sleep in
peace
anywhere he wanted now?”
As can be seen in this extract,
Price offers the reader his piercing clarity with just a hint of mystery to
respect our imagination.
Fossil Record, meanwhile, refers
to a tension between human interaction and nature. The title poem, for
instance, invokes the elements, manmade structures and cycles of human life all
within its opening two lines:
“Wind was stammering at the
windows all night.
If I slept at all it was a
half-sleep…”
This poem steps back from the
everyday to explore that afore-mentioned tension, while it’s juxtaposed on the
page with another piece that homes in on such details: “Suburban Gardens at
Night”…
“…are a country of their own,
belonging to no-one. Evening
after evening
they repossess themselves at the
moment
the kitchen light snaps on
and blinds us to everything
beyond itself…”
Via such meticulous ordering and
layout, the poet establishes an implicit dialogue between the two pieces.
In Fossil Record, Wayne Price demonstrates a control of his narrative
material and a gift for verse that mean it must surely be just a question of
time before he brings out a full collection. I’ll be buying it, but for the
moment this pamphlet provides us with an excellent introduction to his poetry.
Thursday, 24 September 2015
Needlewriters in Lewes
I'll be reading as a guest poet at Needlewriters in Lewes on Thursday 15th October (7 p.m. for 7.45 p.m.).
Needlewriters is a co-operative of poets and prose writers who present a reading each quarter at the Needlemakers Café in Lewes, showcasing writers in a lovely venue. Food and drink are available throughout the evening from the café.
On this occasion, I'll be reading alongside Ros Barber (who'll be featuring her prose) and poet Caroline Clark. I'm looking forward to hearing both of them for the first time and also meeting old friends. I'll be bringing along copies of both my HappenStance pamphlets for sale, but this will be one of the last chances to get hold of a copy, as Inventing Truth is already officially sold out and Tasting Notes is well on the way. You can find more details about the event on the Needlewriters website here.
Needlewriters is a co-operative of poets and prose writers who present a reading each quarter at the Needlemakers Café in Lewes, showcasing writers in a lovely venue. Food and drink are available throughout the evening from the café.
On this occasion, I'll be reading alongside Ros Barber (who'll be featuring her prose) and poet Caroline Clark. I'm looking forward to hearing both of them for the first time and also meeting old friends. I'll be bringing along copies of both my HappenStance pamphlets for sale, but this will be one of the last chances to get hold of a copy, as Inventing Truth is already officially sold out and Tasting Notes is well on the way. You can find more details about the event on the Needlewriters website here.
Thursday, 17 September 2015
Tough but tender, Rosie Miles' Cuts
A certain adjective has to be
addressed from the outset when getting to grips with Rosie Miles’ first
pamphlet, titled Cuts (HappenStance Press, 2015), and that’s “quirky”.
It features on the back cover
blurb, and does so for a good reason. In the context of a
blurb, there’s a need to give a flavour of the book in about fifty words, and
“quirky” is thus an excellent point of departure for a reader of Miles’ poetry.
However, for a reviewer “quirky”
is one of those dangerous words that lends itself to critical shorthand and
stereotypical assumptions. It’s such a generic term that its use requires
clarification of the specifics. In the case of Rosie Miles’ verse, it refers to
her idiosyncratic playing-off of counterpoints, as in the following extract from the
pamphlet’s title poem:
“…In time the money saved from
the entire population
undertaking major procedures on
each other in the kitchen
(with only a negligible rise in
mortality rates)
will be used to commission a
state-of-the-art laser can opener
connected to a computer the size
of just one tin of baked beans
which nonetheless will have parts
with such precision
your lover will be able to put
you to sleep
and open up the serrated edges of
your heart.”
Miles is drawing on tensions
between the objective and the subjective, the distant and the intimate, the
exterior and the interior, sarcasm and sincerity. Her so-called quirkiness lies
in her ability to surprise us by making unusual connections that then seem
inevitable, offering up a tough but tender vision of life.
Another instance of the same
technique can be found in “Cluedo”:
“...Was it Father Tomkins, in the
chapel
with the poisoned communion cup?
Head Gardener Judd, in the shed
with the mud-spattered hoe?
Or even his good wife Mary
with the fish knife, in the
kitchen?
It was me. In the bedroom.
With my heart of gilt and an iron
rose."
Nevertheless, Miles doesn’t just
rely on this one device. She’s also excellent in shorter pieces, where she goes
straight for the emotional guts of the poem, such as in “Strathallan Dew”.
Perhaps my own favourite is “The door has been open for some time”:
“but I would rather stay here
with my candle and my husk of
bread
keeping watch over the setting
silt,
counting how many layers of stone
are needed to make a wall.
Who knows what the light is like
out there
or whether they have bakers.”
Yet again, this poem finds Miles making glorious
connections that set off thoughts and emotions.
Cuts at first might seem a
disparate collection. In fact, it’s held together by a hard-earned understanding
and harnessing by the poet of her own imagination. Rosie Miles' generosity delivers
those insights to the reader, enriching us as it does so.
Monday, 14 September 2015
The Compass poetry magazine
New poetry e-zines seem to be
springing up on a daily basis these days, just as others fall dormant after an
initial burst of enthusiasm. This phenomenon reflects an unsettling and scary speeding-up
of time. Verse appears and is then submerged far too quickly after having been crafted for
months or years.
In such a context, it’s
significant to encounter an e-zine that announces its first issue with the
following declaration of editorial intent:
“..Last autumn the editors were chatting about poetry
and the internet and it struck us that there didn’t appear to be a strong
issue-based poetry magazine coming out of the UK, the web’s equivalent of some
of the wonderful print magazines which we all enjoy. We very much hope that
this site you are browsing fills that gap...”
I’m referring to The Compass. A key point here is not only this ambitious statement but the
fact that the people behind it (Lindsey Holland, Andrew Forster and Kim Moore)
are significant figures in the U.K. poetry scene. Moreover, their work on Issue
One of the magazine backs up their words.
The afore-mentioned issue is packed with excellent
poems. Personal favourites include new pieces by Maria Taylor, Charlotte Gann
and Jonathan Edwards, but there’s plenty more original, top-notch verse to
explore. The reviews section, meanwhile, also opens up avenues for future
reading with in-depth explorations of several intriguing collections.
In summary, The Compass is already a major addition to
the U.K. poetry scene and looks like being around for a long time to come. I’ll
certainly be reading every issue!
Friday, 11 September 2015
And the answer is...Maggie O'Farrell
Maggie O'Farrell is one of my Spanish partner's favourite novelists, but she's also an exceptional poet. I'm using the present tense here for her verse, as there's no evidence to the contrary.
I first mentioned Maggie O'Farrell's poems on Rogue Strands back in 2009, praising them as follows:
"...they're visually explosive, musical and carry a strong narrative drive. Most of all, their voice is distinctive..."
O'Farrell hasn't published any new verse for well over a decade and has never brought out a collection. Her work appeared in journals and won prizes such as the Tabla 1996 competition with "My grandmother accepts", which I quoted a couple of days ago. That poem, for example, seems even better in the context of its having been written before her twenty-fifth birthday.
Has she carried on writing verse in between her ecellent novels? If so, she could still emerge as a major poet.
I first mentioned Maggie O'Farrell's poems on Rogue Strands back in 2009, praising them as follows:
"...they're visually explosive, musical and carry a strong narrative drive. Most of all, their voice is distinctive..."
O'Farrell hasn't published any new verse for well over a decade and has never brought out a collection. Her work appeared in journals and won prizes such as the Tabla 1996 competition with "My grandmother accepts", which I quoted a couple of days ago. That poem, for example, seems even better in the context of its having been written before her twenty-fifth birthday.
Has she carried on writing verse in between her ecellent novels? If so, she could still emerge as a major poet.
Wednesday, 9 September 2015
A mystery quote
Here's a mystery quote from one of my favourite poets:
"...She sat silent in her father's house,
learning Swahili from a book with pages fragile as onion skins
and making her trousseau in scandalous coral-coloured silk...
...The day we buried her the sky drooped
with a cloud, low and soft as a goose belly.
In each clod of earth that fell on her coffin
I could hear the popping stab
of a needle pushing into silk
held taut between determined fingers."
I'll be back later on this week to reveal their identity. In the meantime, any guesses...?!
"...She sat silent in her father's house,
learning Swahili from a book with pages fragile as onion skins
and making her trousseau in scandalous coral-coloured silk...
...The day we buried her the sky drooped
with a cloud, low and soft as a goose belly.
In each clod of earth that fell on her coffin
I could hear the popping stab
of a needle pushing into silk
held taut between determined fingers."
I'll be back later on this week to reveal their identity. In the meantime, any guesses...?!
Tuesday, 1 September 2015
Driven repetition, Kim Moore's The Art of Falling
Take a long, deep breath when
reaching for Kim Moore’s first full collection, The Art
of Falling (Seren 2015), because you’ll be tumbling with her from the first
page onwards through her intoxicating verse.
Moore’s signature poetic
technique is repetition. Her work is riven with it and driven by it. There are
certain poems that even make explicit, conscious nods towards its use, such as “A
Psalm for the Scaffolders”:
“…a psalm for the scaffolders
who fall with a harness on,
who have ten minutes to be
rescued,
a psalm for the scaffolder who
fell
into a clear area, a tube giving
way,
that long. slow fall, a psalm for
him,
who fell thirty feet and
survived,
a psalm for the scaffolder
who saw him fall…”
Moore’s strengths in her
employment of repetition are various. She repeats phrases with slight
variations such as in the tense of a verb (“fall” and “fell”), which invites
the reader to home in on those small changes. Meanwhile, the repeating of whole
structures such as the poem’s title empowers the piece as an invocation. And
then there’s the building of clauses in the continual use of “who”, generating
a pace that combines with the afore-mentioned invocation to lend this poem a
religious charge. In other words, form and content fuse superbly.
Poem after poem, repetition crops
up:
“..a fall from grace, a fall from
God,
to fall in love or to fall
through the gap…”
“And if it be a horse…
…And if it be a swan…
…And if it be a tick…”
“A curse on the children…
…a curse on the boy…
…a curse on the class teacher…”
“And if you saw her…
…and if she set fire…
…and if she threw…”
“…as if one person can’t carry
this with them
and be unchanged, as if I could
speak seagull…”
And I could quote umpteen more. However,
it’s important to underline that Moore is far from being a one-trick pony. There
is variation in tone, of course, alongside a deft narrative touch, a gift for delicious turns of phrase and a fabulous ear, as befits a music teacher. Nevertheless,
repetition rules for much of the book, creating the sensation of a relentless
emotional thrust, charging onwards, seeking an authentic core.
In The Art of Falling, that core is to be found in “How I Abandoned My
Body To His Keeping”, a sequence about
“a relationship marked by coercion and violence”. This sequence lies at
the heart of the collection. I could highlight any one of several pieces for
their power, for their capacity to move and affect, but a personal favourite is
“His Name”. Here are the first four lines:
“Because they tried to make me
say your name,
the shame and blame and frame of
it,
the dirty little game of it, the
dark and distant
heart of it, the cannot be a part
of it…”
And there’s that repetition again,
in Moore’s gorgeous use of the definite article. Of course, it’s even better in
the context of the poem as a whole, but you’ll have to get hold of a copy of The Art of Falling to see what I mean.
Just keep in mind that piece of advice I gave earlier: don’t forget to take a
long, deep breath when snapping the spine.
Tuesday, 25 August 2015
Sheenagh Pugh's blog
I've been a regular reader of Sheenagh Pugh's blog for several years (it's been going even longer than Rogue Strands!). However, when enjoying her thought-provoking interview with Steve Ely last week, I realised that not only was it missing from my blog list but I've never featured it here. Time to put that right on both counts!
Of course, Sheenagh Pugh is a well-known poet and critic, so the blog acts as a complement to her other work. It's also an excellent place to encounter new verse, be intrigued and go out to buy books. This is because Sheenagh works tirelessly to review, discuss and interview, all drawing on her huge pool of knowledge.
I very much recommend a lengthy trawl through its archive, but I would start with her review of Paul Henry's most recent collection (see here). We share an immense admiration for his poetry.
Of course, Sheenagh Pugh is a well-known poet and critic, so the blog acts as a complement to her other work. It's also an excellent place to encounter new verse, be intrigued and go out to buy books. This is because Sheenagh works tirelessly to review, discuss and interview, all drawing on her huge pool of knowledge.
I very much recommend a lengthy trawl through its archive, but I would start with her review of Paul Henry's most recent collection (see here). We share an immense admiration for his poetry.
Wednesday, 12 August 2015
Poets on Facebook: the nightmare of the news feed
I know it's my own fault virtually all my "friends" on Facebook should be poets, but that doesn't change the terrifying nature of my news feed at times, especially when I'm feeling vulnerable about the value of my own verse.
People are variously delighted to have work included in an anthology, so pleased to be publishing two poems in a magazine, reading at an event next week, bringing out a new collection in 2016, finishing off a new poem, celebrating having been shortlisted, linking to their new title on Amazon...
...what's wrong with you, Stewart?! Just look at what everyone else has achieved while you've been redrafting that poxy line for the fourth time. And deep down, you know it still isn't right even though you're urging yourself to fall in love with it enough to send the thing off this afternoon. If you read any more of that stuff on Facebook, you probably will.
People are variously delighted to have work included in an anthology, so pleased to be publishing two poems in a magazine, reading at an event next week, bringing out a new collection in 2016, finishing off a new poem, celebrating having been shortlisted, linking to their new title on Amazon...
...what's wrong with you, Stewart?! Just look at what everyone else has achieved while you've been redrafting that poxy line for the fourth time. And deep down, you know it still isn't right even though you're urging yourself to fall in love with it enough to send the thing off this afternoon. If you read any more of that stuff on Facebook, you probably will.
Saturday, 1 August 2015
Ian Abbot's Finishing the Picture
The Jul./Aug. issue of The Next Review is now out, featuring my extensive review of Ian Abbot's Finishing the Picture. In it, I address questions such as the following:
"...Does Ian Abbot’s poetry stand up to scrutiny? Does it match the power of his life story? Is he, in the light of Finishing the Picture, a major poet about to be rediscovered and valued at last...?"
To find out more, you can get hold of a copy via this link. There's also an interview with Clive James, plus original work by Eve Lacey, Paul Howarth and others. Here's a shot of the cover:
"...Does Ian Abbot’s poetry stand up to scrutiny? Does it match the power of his life story? Is he, in the light of Finishing the Picture, a major poet about to be rediscovered and valued at last...?"
To find out more, you can get hold of a copy via this link. There's also an interview with Clive James, plus original work by Eve Lacey, Paul Howarth and others. Here's a shot of the cover:
Monday, 27 July 2015
The fit of a poem
Further to my previous post, it's also worth bearing in mind that rejection/acceptance isn't as black and white as it may seem. Magazine editors will often choose a poem because it fits in well with others that have already been selected for a certain issue. On the other hand, of course, a poem might miss out because it doesn't work alongside previously chosen pieces.
This question of fit is also relevant in terms of the transition from magazine to collection. There are occasions when a poem that appeared in a top journal just doesn't pay its way in the context of a full-length manuscript. In an opposing sense, meanwhile, certain pieces are destined never to be accepted for stand-alone publication but turn out to be crucial to the flow of a book. They bounce off and enrich the poems around them.
Of course, all the above is easy in theory and difficult to judge on a case-by-case basis. I think many poets can recall having agonised over a poem's possible worth!
This question of fit is also relevant in terms of the transition from magazine to collection. There are occasions when a poem that appeared in a top journal just doesn't pay its way in the context of a full-length manuscript. In an opposing sense, meanwhile, certain pieces are destined never to be accepted for stand-alone publication but turn out to be crucial to the flow of a book. They bounce off and enrich the poems around them.
Of course, all the above is easy in theory and difficult to judge on a case-by-case basis. I think many poets can recall having agonised over a poem's possible worth!
Wednesday, 22 July 2015
The usefulness of rejection
Rejection can be immensely useful. Apart from teaching us anger management and giving us an excuse to redecorate that spot where the coffee mug somehow smashed, it's a filter and a warning, dropping a hint that our work might not be ready, indicating which poems might not be on the money, encouraging us to graft once more. Those mights, of course, are due to the vagaries of taste, as mentioned elsewhere on this blog!
In fact, I feel that renowned poets run the risk of never having this chance. Certain editors are keen to have a famous name adorning their mag, so they are liable to take work even if it's not 100% convincing.
In this context, I was interested the other day to read an interview with American poet, Matthew Siegel, in which he discussed his prize-winning collection, Blood Work, which had previously been a runner-up elsewhere in a different form. Here's his view on that process:
“I thank my lucky stars that they didn’t take that book,” he said. “I mean, it’s a great prize — I would have been thrilled to win it — but the book wasn’t ready. And it’s so much better now."
Siegel is also very interesting on his countless magazine rejections. You can read the full piece here.
In fact, I feel that renowned poets run the risk of never having this chance. Certain editors are keen to have a famous name adorning their mag, so they are liable to take work even if it's not 100% convincing.
In this context, I was interested the other day to read an interview with American poet, Matthew Siegel, in which he discussed his prize-winning collection, Blood Work, which had previously been a runner-up elsewhere in a different form. Here's his view on that process:
“I thank my lucky stars that they didn’t take that book,” he said. “I mean, it’s a great prize — I would have been thrilled to win it — but the book wasn’t ready. And it’s so much better now."
Siegel is also very interesting on his countless magazine rejections. You can read the full piece here.
Wednesday, 15 July 2015
Roy Marshall and The Sun Bathers
I met Roy Marshall for the first time at a HappenStance reading back in 2011. Maria Taylor introduced me to him and mentioned he was one of the winners of the Crystal Clear Creators pamphlet competition. We shared a couple of beers that night and I was immediately struck by his terrific passion for poetry. At that stage, he'd just started a blog and had also got a few initial acceptances from small magazines.
Roy Marshall published the pamphlet, titled Gopagilla, not long afterwards, and I gave it an excellent review here on Rogue Strands, mentioning that "Gopagilla is a satisfying and poetically coherent first pamphlet. It delivers a lot and promises even more. I very much look forward to reading more of Roy Marshall's poetry in the future." However, he didn't stop there. Let's fast-forward four years. Not only has he won several prizes for individual poems and had acceptances from many of the U.K.'s leading magazines, but he's also published a full-length collection, titled The Sun Bathers, with Shoestring Press.
And then this last week came the best part: The Sun Bathers has been shortlisted for the Michael Murphy Memorial Prize alongside books from major players such as Bloodaxe. This is terrific news, not just for Marshall but for other late starters, for those that have taken alternative routes, for small publishers who believe in a poet and back their work to the hilt.
In short, congratulations, Roy! Oh, and while I'm about it, I very much recommend a visit to that afore-mentioned blog. It's packed with poetic tales, interviews and original verse. What's more, I've suddenly realised it's somehow still not on my Blog List to the right of this poet. Time to put that right...
Roy Marshall published the pamphlet, titled Gopagilla, not long afterwards, and I gave it an excellent review here on Rogue Strands, mentioning that "Gopagilla is a satisfying and poetically coherent first pamphlet. It delivers a lot and promises even more. I very much look forward to reading more of Roy Marshall's poetry in the future." However, he didn't stop there. Let's fast-forward four years. Not only has he won several prizes for individual poems and had acceptances from many of the U.K.'s leading magazines, but he's also published a full-length collection, titled The Sun Bathers, with Shoestring Press.
And then this last week came the best part: The Sun Bathers has been shortlisted for the Michael Murphy Memorial Prize alongside books from major players such as Bloodaxe. This is terrific news, not just for Marshall but for other late starters, for those that have taken alternative routes, for small publishers who believe in a poet and back their work to the hilt.
In short, congratulations, Roy! Oh, and while I'm about it, I very much recommend a visit to that afore-mentioned blog. It's packed with poetic tales, interviews and original verse. What's more, I've suddenly realised it's somehow still not on my Blog List to the right of this poet. Time to put that right...
Monday, 13 July 2015
Writer and poet
When I first joined Twitter at the beginning of this year, I was immediately struck by the way people try to describe themselves in a few words. One term that crops up on a regular basis is "writer and poet". Well, I'm sorry, but this just sounds wrong! A poet is a writer. The latter is the generic term in which we'd include the former. Of course, I'm being slightly pedantic: I know full well that users mean they write prose as well as poetry, but my question is why they phrase their description in such a way.
One possibility is that I'm over-interpreting things, and the explanation is simply that Twitter lends itself to abbreviation. On the other hand, I do have the feeling that people sometimes view verse as a separate entity to be kept apart from all other writing. As Twitter shows, even poets themselves can end up falling into this trap.
One possibility is that I'm over-interpreting things, and the explanation is simply that Twitter lends itself to abbreviation. On the other hand, I do have the feeling that people sometimes view verse as a separate entity to be kept apart from all other writing. As Twitter shows, even poets themselves can end up falling into this trap.
Monday, 6 July 2015
D.A. Prince wins the East Midlands Book Award
I was delighted to learn last week that D.A. Prince had won the East Midland Book Award for Common Ground (HappenStance, 2014).
My delight was down to a number of factors: the book is excellent (you might recall I gave it a very positive review on Rogue Strands a few months ago), and the win is also a boost for HappenStance. However, perhaps the key point for me is that this collection is perhaps the type of work that should find wide recognition and doesn't tend to be given as much as it deserves. As discussed in my above-mentioned review, D.A. Prince writes a poetry of the almost-unnoticed accumulation of emotional impact, building imperceptibly towards unexpected ramifications.
In other words, the winning text in this case wasn't packed with flashy fireworks and showy posturing, nor was the collection a debut written by a bright young thing who's been mentored by a famous name. In this case, the winner simply wrote a terrific book of verse. Congratulations, Davina!
My delight was down to a number of factors: the book is excellent (you might recall I gave it a very positive review on Rogue Strands a few months ago), and the win is also a boost for HappenStance. However, perhaps the key point for me is that this collection is perhaps the type of work that should find wide recognition and doesn't tend to be given as much as it deserves. As discussed in my above-mentioned review, D.A. Prince writes a poetry of the almost-unnoticed accumulation of emotional impact, building imperceptibly towards unexpected ramifications.
In other words, the winning text in this case wasn't packed with flashy fireworks and showy posturing, nor was the collection a debut written by a bright young thing who's been mentored by a famous name. In this case, the winner simply wrote a terrific book of verse. Congratulations, Davina!
Monday, 29 June 2015
John Foggin's poetry blog
Despite announcements of its imminent demise in the face of other media, the poetry blogging scene in the U.K. continues to boast excellent health. What's more, high-quality blogs emerge on a regular basis.
One such relative newcomer is John Foggin, an excellent poet who lives in West Yorkshire. I've been following his blog since he started it last year, and have been meaning to add him to my list on the sidebar for some time. He put up an incredibly moving post yesterday. You can read it here.
One such relative newcomer is John Foggin, an excellent poet who lives in West Yorkshire. I've been following his blog since he started it last year, and have been meaning to add him to my list on the sidebar for some time. He put up an incredibly moving post yesterday. You can read it here.
Wednesday, 24 June 2015
The establishment?
6 a (the establishment) n. the group in a society exercising authority or influence, and seen as resisting change. b any influential or controlling group (the literary establishment).
It seems easy to argue that the University of Oxford represents the establishment, but what about the election of Simon Armitage as its Professor of Poetry? Do the voters themselves necessarily form part of the establishment by virtue of having studied in Oxford in the past? Why did they choose Armitage?
And then there's the poetry establishment. If such a phenomenon exists, is it represented more by Armitage or by Geoffrey Hill, his predecessor in the role?
It seems easy to argue that the University of Oxford represents the establishment, but what about the election of Simon Armitage as its Professor of Poetry? Do the voters themselves necessarily form part of the establishment by virtue of having studied in Oxford in the past? Why did they choose Armitage?
And then there's the poetry establishment. If such a phenomenon exists, is it represented more by Armitage or by Geoffrey Hill, his predecessor in the role?
Tuesday, 16 June 2015
A growing obsession: the prizewinning culture of U.K. poetry
Most of us love the thrill of
winning an award, and I’m no exception. I’ve even been known to enter a poetry
competition or two. Over the past few years, however, I’ve become more and more
concerned about the constant growth of a prizewinning culture in U.K. poetry.
It’s turned into a dangerous obsession.
The recent shortlist for the Forward
prizes is a useful point of departure for discussion. There are many excellent
books on that list, and the judges have clearly done a conscientious job within
their remit: to find what they feel are the best books to have been presented
to the prize.
The problem begins when marketing
departments, journalists and the general public use the Forward shortlist and
its resultant anthology as a summary/snapshot of what’s going on in U.K.
poetry. As such, it’s inevitably limiting.
Let’s be clear: in no way am I
belittling the quality of the Forward shortlist or the work of the judges. The
issue is that the frenzied parading of the Forward Prize, the T.S. Eliot Prize,
the Roehampton Prize, the Aldeburgh Prize, the Seamus Heaney Prize, etc, etc, has
become a negative phenomenon. These prizes and their shortlists are providing
us with a narrow definition of success and failure, inclusion and exclusion.
The immediacy of newsfeeds has encouraged the public to accept the ease of such interpretations.
People are invited to recognise their own lack of knowledge like novice wine
drinkers who are bombarded with medal-adorned bottles, all approved by panels
of famous critics. It’s time to admit the negative consequences of our growing
obsession with prizes in U.K. poetry, to trust ourselves to explore
independently once more.
Thursday, 11 June 2015
Editorial taste
When celebrating an acceptance or wallowing in self-doubt after a rejection, I always try to remember that the poetry world is packed with the ironies of differing editorial tastes. For example, there are many tales of prize-winning poems that had previously failed to find a home despite numerous attempts to place them.
My own favourite experience was a terrific review of my pamphlet, Inventing Truth, in an extremely well-regarded journal. The piece praised and highlighted a poem that had been rejected by that very magazine a year earlier. Now, which of those views of my work do I prefer to think was right...?!
My own favourite experience was a terrific review of my pamphlet, Inventing Truth, in an extremely well-regarded journal. The piece praised and highlighted a poem that had been rejected by that very magazine a year earlier. Now, which of those views of my work do I prefer to think was right...?!
Friday, 5 June 2015
A harnessed relish for language, Paul Stephenson's Those People
Paul Stephenson is a linguist,
and this background shines through in his first pamphlet, Those People (Smith-Doorstep, 2015). Stephenson’s awareness of the
nuts and bolts of language has been heightened both by having learnt a foreign
language and by having lived abroad among non-native speakers of English.
Let’s start with an example from the
opening lines of “Wake Up And”:
“smell the coffee
smell the coughing
the cacophony
the cafard
the cavern…”
Stephenson is taking a cliché,
playing with it and twisting our syntactic and semantic connotations, jumping
from one register to another, while relishing the way words work round our
tongues. Every single word is under the poet’s control.
Other poems, meanwhile, find him
returning to the language of the environment of his youth and reassessing it
for the reader’s benefit, as in “Cab”:
“My mother tells me to ask
for a reliable driver.
She says apparently
this is what to mention
because Jill told her
over a pensioner’s lunch…
…My mother says when you ring,
especially at night,
to emphasise the reliable
and they’ll understand
right away on the other end
what you’re on about.”
This piece demonstrates that Stephenson
not only understands the way a certain generation of English middle-class
ladies can take a single word and load it with immense connotations, but he is
capable of transmitting and transforming his observations on the page.
There are also several list
poems in the book, in which Stephenson riffs on a subject. These sometimes seem
slightly like ingenious note-taking, and I tend to find myself waiting for a
launching-out beyond that doesn’t happen. However, this is probably more a
reflection of my expectations as a reader rather than Stephenson’s
achievements, and those achievements are many. I’m now going to focus on
another of them.
The verse in Those People is magpie-like in its collecting of influences (an
ability that linguists have to acquire!), yet there’s an idiosyncratic core
that holds it together. Stephenson homes in on specifics and trusts the reader
to carry them off elsewhere, as in the chapbook’s closing poem, “Capacity”,
which depicts the narrator’s wait to be picked up to start an Interrail trip:
“Seventy litres: in theory more
than plenty
for three t-shirts, two shorts, the
pair of jeans
you’re wearing. Then the question
of the tent…
…wallet with Velcro strap, wrapped
tight around
the waist. Typical Monday. Your
father at work.
Your mother out somewhere. Your
lift here soon.”
This poem is packed with the
details of a scene. Of course, it especially resonates with myself, as I’m of
the same generation as Stephenson, a generation that embraced Interrail
experiences before the advent of budget airlines and gap years in Oz.
However, the main virtue of the
piece (and much of Stephenson’s verse) lies in a capacity to appeal to readers of different backgrounds. It’s a portrayal
of a key moment in the process of leaving home. Moreover, matter-of-fact
language has been charged with tremendous nuance. For instance, the reader is
left wondering why the mother is out, and so the poet strikes the spark of our
imagination.
By now, you’ve probably realised that
I enjoyed Paul Stephenson’s Those People.
There’s a coherent, ambitious poetic method at work here. Get hold of a copy
and see what I mean for yourself!
Tuesday, 26 May 2015
Four poems in The Next Review
I'm delighted to report that I've got four poems in the May/June 2015 (Vol 2, Nº5) issue of The Next Review. What's more, it seems I've even made the cover!
If you like the look of it, you can click here to get hold of a copy.
If you like the look of it, you can click here to get hold of a copy.
Thursday, 21 May 2015
How do we read a poetry collection?
This is a key question that I find myself pondering as I work on the order of poems in the mansucript for my first full collection. Do we read from cover to cover or do we dip in where the book just happens to open?
Well, my own feeling is that people read in both ways. As for myself, I tend to move through a collection from start to finish on a first reading. This is to try to get a grip on how it ebbs and flows. Afterwards, however, I'll return to the book at random, flicking back and forth, digging more deeply into individual pieces.
As a consequence, I'm breaking my poems down into pairs that engage in dialogues with each other, all within the framework of how I want the collection to read as a whole. Furthermore, I'm continually bearing in mind Matt Merritt's remarks to me in a conversation a few years ago: as a journalist in his day job, he felt we often read poetry books much as we read newspapers, in that the right-hand page attracts more of our attention.
After every revision I print up and provisionally bind the collection, ensuring that the left-hand, right-hand ordering is respected throughout. I then go back over it, viewing it as a whole, viewing it in pairs. All those revisions will click into place one day, just like when I chip away at an individual poem, and I'll suddenly know the manuscript is ready!
Well, my own feeling is that people read in both ways. As for myself, I tend to move through a collection from start to finish on a first reading. This is to try to get a grip on how it ebbs and flows. Afterwards, however, I'll return to the book at random, flicking back and forth, digging more deeply into individual pieces.
As a consequence, I'm breaking my poems down into pairs that engage in dialogues with each other, all within the framework of how I want the collection to read as a whole. Furthermore, I'm continually bearing in mind Matt Merritt's remarks to me in a conversation a few years ago: as a journalist in his day job, he felt we often read poetry books much as we read newspapers, in that the right-hand page attracts more of our attention.
After every revision I print up and provisionally bind the collection, ensuring that the left-hand, right-hand ordering is respected throughout. I then go back over it, viewing it as a whole, viewing it in pairs. All those revisions will click into place one day, just like when I chip away at an individual poem, and I'll suddenly know the manuscript is ready!
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