When reviewing, it’s usually wise to
avoid invoking a metaphor or an image that might draw attention away from the
poet and towards the critic. Any such flashiness invites accusations of
selfishness and flashiness, because a review should be about the book in
question, not about the reviewer.
However, there are a few cases where
an exception is justified, where a metaphor can enlighten and illustrate. S.A.
Leavesley’s pamphlet, How to Grow Matches
(Against the Grain Poetry Press, 2018), is a good example: each piece finds her
opening the floodgates at a precise moment, her delicately controlled releases
of anger bringing about effects many miles downstream.
One such instance occurs in the
closing stanza to ’Her Cumuli Collector’:
“…The day he left, not a single wisp
of white
or grey against the bright blue sky.
But it rained non-stop inside her:
heavy,
pounding – the rain of dark angels.”
These lines demonstrate Leavesley’s knowledge
of language’s nuts and bolts, of how to subvert them to effect, as she removes
the main verb from her first sentence, thus unsettling the reader, before
homing in on her clashing, conflicting final image. Moreover, her line break
between “heavy” and “pounding” exacerbates that very sensation.
How
to Grow Matches uses the challenging of linguistic
convention to ramp up its implicit conflicts, as in the final lines of ’Bowl
of oranges: a still life’…
“…She pinches her mouth closed,
tightens her heart muscle to a fist,
hands her husband a fresh orange.”
The pivotal word here is “closed”.
It’s unexpected and casts a new, more powerful light on the verb that precedes
it.
Anger often implies and involves the
loss of control, but S.A. Leavesley shows that its impact is actually far
greater when used with a deft touch. How
to Grow Matches is an excellent pamphlet from a new press that deserves to
find a spot at the top table of U.K. poetry pamphlet publishing. I’ll be
keeping a close eye on its development.
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