A well
produced and written first collection from an emerging publisher always
represents an enticing prospect, and Gram Joel Davies’ Bolt Down This Earth (V. Press, 2017) is no exception.
Davies’
poetry relishes a sense of otherness which unsettles at first. At certain
moments, conjunctions, prepositions or articles are suppressed, contractions
avoided, nouns turned into verbs, everything often wrapped in the aural effect
of repeated vowels. This means that the reader initially has to feel a way
through these poems as if sight were blurred. However, as we get to grips with
Davies’ idiosyncratic use of language, the consequence is that a perspective is
eventually revealed afresh, brighter and more vivid than we could have
expected.
One such
example occurs in the closing lines of “The Plan”:
“…while
you and I, at four a.m.,
thunder with
the bedstead on the wall,
a bolt
will plunge the flower bed,
the
headland bitten like a scone,
and we’ll
crescendo to the ocean floor –
ride the
rocksled through a whooping storm.”
This
extract provides two instances of nouns being converted into verbs – “thunder”
and “crescendo”, while the reader would also conventionally expect a
preposition after the verb “plunge”. Moreover, there’s an edgy, constant, almost
enervating repetition of one vowel sound, “…bedstead…bed…headland…crescendo…”,
all topped off by the inventive “rocksled” and complemented by a risky simile “like
a scone” that pulls off its effect by evoking the crumbling texture and chalky
appearance of the headland in question.
It does
take a while for the reader to come to terms with Gram Joel Davies’ poetry, as
if having to get used to a new dialect of an already-learnt language.
Nevertheless, Bolt Down This Earth
shows that the effort is worthwhile. Davies’ sonorous, surprising and jolting
narratives are coherent, cohesive and highly unusual. They’ll challenge your
expectations.
Dear Matthew
ReplyDeleteThanks for this heads-up. First poetry collections are almost always interesting as are first novels.
Best wishes from Simon R Gladdish