Wendy Pratt’s new collection, When
I Think of my Body as a Horse (Smith-Doorstep, 2021) is not only brave and
ambitious in its thematic scope and aesthetic approach, but also achieves an
astonishing degree of humanity, coherence and cohesion.
Pratt takes received formats by the
scruff of their necks and lifts them out of their expected usages, such as in
the case of Two Week Wait. At first sight, it seems a supposed, so-called list
poem, beginning with a conventional couplet and starting three of its first six
lines with a repeated form (love + verb + and`+ verb), as follows:
Love turned the dial up
and watched us burn.
Love caught us like frogspawn
and cupped us in the light
of a duck egg blue day…
This technique creates the effect of a
chant, lulling the reader into a false sense of syntactic security. However,
Pratt quickly changes gear as the poems moves forward, piling up irregular line
breaks, then two clauses per line, then a foreshortened final line…
…Love was needles and charts
and scans, love was clinic visits
and operations, love riddled us
with drugs, love shook us with hope,
love gave us you, love lost us both,
love lost us all.
Via her subverting of a list poem,
Pratt rips away an initial incantation and transforms it into a wail, into a
heartrending lament.
The above poem is also an excellent
instance of the deft use of repetition that crops up throughout this
collection. Sentence and line structures mirror each other up to a pivotal
point where they suddenly diverge in meaning, highlighting those contrasts and
differences. Here’s one such example from Nesting…
I was giddy with instinct. I wanted
to pull bits of my new wild world
into my bedroom. I wanted
to open the window and jump out,
onto the back of grazing sheep
and pull their wool out. I wanted to
use
my own spit to shore up the pebbledash
of our ex-council house…
This extract juxtaposes the natural
and the manmade, the human and the animal, all via the afore-mentioned device
of twisted repetition, drawing out the tensions and unifying forces between
them, just like in the following lines from later on in the same poem…
…I was afraid of the sheer witch craft
of my body, my poor body and its need
to nest, my animal body and its
unformed hopes…
In this case, layers are placed on top
of the initial construction: my body becomes my poor body and
then turns into my animal body, implicitly highlighting the crucial
importance of the link between animal and body. This is a theme that’s of
utmost significance to the poet’s understanding of her own being and of the
world it inhabits. Furthermore, by extension, it’s just as fundamental to our
reading of the book as a whole.
Pratt’s harnessing of intense imagery
and complex sentence structure, all with an ever-present thrust into the core
of her inspiration, is one of the joys of When I Think of my Body as a Horse.
It enables her to turn what is already an emotionally charged story into art
without ever slipping into sentimentality, her skill shining through on every
page. In other words, the judges of this year’s major prizes will struggle to
find a more human yet exquisitely crafted collection. Here’s hoping that When
I Think of my Body as a Horse soon receives the recognition that it so
richly deserves.