While maintaining many characteristic
traits of his poetry, such as the portrayal of relationships and the human
significance of objects, all within the context of condensed lyric snapshots,
Richie McCaffery’s new pamphlet, Skail (New Walk Editions, 2025), also offers
its readers a glimpse into the new routes that his writing is exploring.
To start with, there’s his abandonment of the first person in much of the collection, many of the poems
referring to a ‘you’ and a ‘he’.
This decision on McCaffery’s part not only generates greater distance between
the poet and his characters, but also highlights a fresh filter of external observation.
This above-mentioned use of reportage
relates to a constant questioning and doubting of certainties that runs through
the pamphlet. Of special interest is McCaffery’s repeated use of specific
words. For instance, ‘but’ crops up on no less than
thirteen occasions in these twenty pages of poems, while ‘though’ appears eight times. What’s more,
they’re employed together in certain poems, one after the other, as in the closing stanza to the
title poem…
But the bulk of his ash was left to
her, and went
headfirst into the remains of the vegetable
bed.
And though it was a wet night, the
dust cloud of him
hovered under the streetlamp, as if
getting its bearings.
At several points throughout the
collection, ‘but’ acts as a hinge, starting a
last line or a final stanza, just like in the above example, indicating a
change in tone as McCaffery homes in on the core of his inspiration. And then in
the poem’s concluding clause, ‘as
if’, another of McCaffery’s
favoured turns of phrase, also kicks in with a leap that lends the poem an
extra layer.
When looking at this quatrain in
depth, it becomes clear to the reader that those three devices (‘but’, ‘though’
and ‘as if’) all undercut each other in
turn. Absolutes no longer exist in vital and linguistic terms. Supposedly
modest and clear-cut words suddenly take on unexpected new ramifications.
This additional depth of nuance is to
be savoured by any reader, but especially by McCaffery aficionados. Skail
evokes the undercutting of everything that came before it, hinting at riches to
come in his future writing, a significant landmark on his continuing poetic
journey.
Review of The Dreaming of Hinkley Point by Graeme Ryan
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